Alpha's Regret the Luna is Secret Heiress (by Sylvia)

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  Sharmelon2025-07-21 15:41:07

  Whisper 118

  Chapter 118. I'm done. Inconsistencies are out of control!!...

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  Sharmelon2025-07-21 15:37:37

  Whisper 118

  Chapter 118. I'm finished. The inconsistencies are too many. First Vanessa kidnapped Grace at the engagement party but while Connor is in the hospital after being stabbed, it suddenly becomes Jessica. Then Olivia and Connor have sex, but the episode of their sex after aphrodisiac never happened. Now, Olivia is surprised that Connor can cook and he surprises her saying he learned from Dorothy -- that was many chapters ago. Oh and when Connor was in hospital, Olivia "teaches herself to cook' to take him food including broth . Hello?! Olivia cooked at minimum broth for Evan for 3 years. I'm done....

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    Sharmelon2025-07-21 15:39:03

    I enjoyed the story until the engagement party. Now the storyline is all over the place.

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    Sharmelon2025-07-21 15:38:13

    It was well written up until the

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